Is Internet vital?

2020 Cambridge B1 Exam will include a 100 word article and I'm enclosing a few examples. Taking inspiration from the B2 article I created a sample which can meet the new exam requirements

Is Internet vital for our lives?

Internet plays a strategic role in our life since we seem to suffer from electronic addiction as recent studies have revealed. 

Internet offers many opportunities as buying and selling products, keeping in touch with people, applying for a job, studying, booking a holiday or a concert, sharing pictures and videos, having access to news, music, films and programs.

Despite all advantages it offers, Internet has serious drawbacks derived from its intensive use as memory lapses, difficulty to concentrate, a strong impact on reasoning skills but above all a sort of isolation individuals experience. 

Internet is important but it shouldn’t overrule our lives.